Book Review: Mercy’s Embrace Series

Books:  Mercy’s Embrace– So Rough a Course, So Lively a Chase, The Lady Must Decide

Author: Laura Hile

Did Austen write a more disliked family than the Elliots of Kellynch?  I don’t think so.  Perhaps some would disagree, but I cannot fathom how.  Between their pride, arrogance, self-absorbed obsession with wealth and appearance, “every feeling revolts!”  So, when I saw Laura Hile’s book about Elizabeth Elliot, I wondered why she’d bothered.  Who cares about Elizabeth Elliot?  “I wouldn’t care if she were alive or dead only that she was Anne’s sister.”  (loosely paraphrased quote by Mr. E from Emma.  My apologies Miss Austen.)  However, when I read the publisher’s synopsis, I confess I was a little intrigued.   This is what I read.

Publisher’s Synopsis:

Twenty-nine winters’ revolving frosts…
have brought no change
to Miss Elliot’s matrimonial state.

Elizabeth Elliot is as beautiful as ever, yet no gentleman of proper stature has requested her hand. Lady Russell claims she is too particular, but Elizabeth begs to differ. She is not about to settle for a gentleman of no distinction like her sister Mary. Nor will she follow her heart and marry a commoner with no title but Captain—that was Anne’s mistake. As for romance and the tender stirrings of the heart, why, only a simpleton would fall prey to such foolishness!

But when the proud Miss Elliot encounters a pair of smiling Irish eyes in a most unsuitable man of vulgar connections, she is tempted to change her opinion. Almost.

Jane Austen’s beloved Persuasion provides the backdrop for this first in a series of delightful romps set in Regency England.

After that, who could resist at least giving the book a small chance?  Well, I’m here with fork in hand and chewing my fried crow.  I was hooked long before the end of the first chapter.  Ms. Hile has a delightful ability to keep you in Regency England while showing that human nature is still human nature, regardless of century, and therefore, make the reader nod when people behave in stunningly familiar ways.  When I started reading, I was afraid she’d make Elizabeth highly reformed.  I had horrible visions of her serving as a missionary to street urchins or marrying a day laborer much to the shock of her family and friends.  Thankfully, Ms. Hile has some common sense and a feeling for the proportion of things.  She did not change Elizabeth Elliot’s character at all.  In fact, because this story is centered around Elizabeth, you really do see her faults in glaring clarity in a way that the original story couldn’t have tried to do.

So, why do I like books about such an unsympathetic character?  Well, because that’s the best part of these books– she becomes sympathetic slowly but surely.  She doesn’t become another Anne or a Fanny Price or anything, but you see more depth of her character, and the character of Patrick Gill helps show sides of her personality that she’s never had a chance to develop.  The Elizabeth Elliot that you meet in the first book is precisely the one you knew and disliked from Persuasion, and is still the same person at the end of the third book, but with new facets of her personality revealed in a way that makes you like her even while disliking her.  She grows, matures, and has a new appeal, but she is still Elizabeth Elliot– Anne’s obnoxious and haughty sister.  You finish the third book with the feeling that she might even grow a bit more of a heart given time.

So many Regency era books are difficult to lose yourself in, because of the particular style of writing.  As much as I love Austen, I am rarely caught away in the story so much that I have a hard time coming back to reality.  I just enjoy the literary fun and never think much about the style.  However, Laura Hile, as did Barbara Cornthwaite in her book, managed to maintain that Regency style and feeling while still managing to transport me from the present into the past.  That takes some skillful writing.  These Crown Hill Writers Guild authors do not disappoint!

One of the most delightful things about the book was seeing other Austen characters appear in the story.  Mr. Rushworth makes a grand showing as only he can.  His mother… oh dear, his mother.  Caroline Bingley is, of course, her normal obnoxious self.  It’s a delight to read and hate her at will.  I’ve always said that this is why I love fiction– it is not a sin to hate someone who doesn’t exist!  🙂

The end of the third book is one of the most brilliantly written things I’ve ever read.  Ms. Hile does a fabulous job of wrapping up the story with a satisfying ending, while still making you eager for more.  If she never wrote another volume, you’d not be left feeling like too much was left untied.  However, she does leave enough open to make the reader wonder if she might just favor us with a fourth book.

I highly recommend this series.  If you are a fan of Jane Austen’s Persuasion, you will not be disappointed.  Indeed, I do think even those who aren’t particularly drawn to that novel will like this series.  Don’t hesitate, dash over to Amazon or the AustenEmporium at Wytherngate Press and snag your copies today.

Now, Ms. Hile has graciously offered to give an entire set of the Mercy’s Embrace books to one of my blog readers!  So, please leave a comment and tell me what Jane Austen character you would want to read more about in the future.

23 thoughts on “Book Review: Mercy’s Embrace Series

  1. This sounds like a series that I need to get, not only for me to read, but also for my daughters!

    As for a character to read more about… that would be Fanny Price’s sister, Susan. 😀

  2. OOH! I have been wanting to read these since you told me about them.

    Hmmm.. I would love to hear more about Mary Bennett. That girl needs to get a life. 😉

    Ok, hmmm, I like Rachel’s suggestion (Margaret). Quite honestly it probably would be the best… of course, it could be fun to have Miss Steele’s sister (cant for the life of me remember her name) in a series.

  3. These sound great! I am ashamed to admit how little I’ve read of Austen. I’ve read a few, but not as many as I know I ought to. Like you, I don’t find myself getting quite as carried away as I always hope I will. Since Sense and Sensibility is next on my list, I’ll say I want to read more about Elinor Dashwood.

  4. Hmmm…

    I think that I would like to read a book about Jane Fairfax from Emma or quite possibly even Isabella Thorpe from Northanger Abbey would be an interesting challenge.


  5. As much as this avid reader hates to admit it, I will admit that I haven’t read many (if any) Jane Austen novels. Perhaps this could be my introduction to this type of novel, they do sound intriguing.

  6. OOh these look really interesting. And I agree that Mary Bennett needs a life and it would be interesting to see how that happens. I think it would also be fun to learn what really happened to Lydia Bennett , years later, or Georgianna Darcy.

  7. Oh, my goodness! After your description, I am DYING to read this series!!!

    As for the character I’d like to read about–other than Elizabeth Elliot, now–I agree with Rachel. I’d love to read about Margaret Dashwood, all grown up. Getting updates on her sisters’ lives would be a happy bonus.

  8. Oh, yes, it would be interesting to read more about Georgianna and Margaret.

    You are right about Mary Bennett, Challice. It would be interesting to see what twists and turns her character might take and if she could be made to be quite likeable.


  9. I’d love to read a book about that one character that Austen never got around to writing about… the interesting one. Something with a real plot and multi-dimensional personalities.

  10. would like to read a story written for margaret dashwood from sense and sensibility! Was good to read your review. It will defintely help me in buying the books. Was disappointed with fredrick wentworth, captain.

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